This is story I started writing in school, so I was wondering what you thought of it. comments are not necessary but appreciated:
I walked though the big, green door to see an open, rolling green field. I breathed in the sweet air as I walked forward. I came up to a giant forest full of rainbow colored, ferret like animals. They said, "follow us!" so I did. They showed me a miniscule house. Before they left, they gave me a little bag. I went into the house to find a cute little puppy sitting on a mountainous pile of gold, rare weapons, and precious jewels. The puppy woke up and said, "Take what you need." I opened the bag the rainbow ferr